Pretty Crazy

Hello! But the grass was dry, and fire can travel fast. No duh. I feel like I'm being told here. Perhaps rephrase this to something along the lines of: "the ...

Looks like the review parts are pretty much covered. Just thought I'd comment and say that I liked this. The ironic ending was kind of funny. And I mean that ...

Hello, I read this before but must have forgotten to review this. xD So, there isn't any nitpicks (besides the ones Iceprincess got) that I can see. Alrighty then, let's ...

Insparation comes from odd places, doesn't it? I thought this was really clever and creative. And we can all agree on this, I'm sure. Long live summer! ~Crazy

Hello, Seven years this sunny Sunday since you passed, From heaven your voice echoes, This, for me, is the best part. The choice of wording here is really nice. The ...

Hello, Back for another review! First up, the first section. I must say I'm fascinated by Bell's energy and quirkiness. And you did a good job of setting the mood ...

This is amazing! The way all the sections are structured and yet perfectly rhymed leaves me speechless. I’ll fight the demons that come back to haunt me. I’ll fight the ...

This seems a little random. But it's still a sweet poem. I bet you came up with it as you wrote, didn't you? If not, sorry if I offended you. ...

Okay, I was going to do a sequel to last year. But then I got thinking, "I need something I can write 50,000 words about" so I'm going to do ...

Wow! I can't think of anything else to say but that I really like this! Why? I couldn't tell you. I just did. Perhaps it was how strong voiced your ...

I'm not doing too good for reviews on this story so far. I don't know, does this story make sense? Any and all comments appreciated! “Forget safety, let’s just take ...

Hello, I'm going to try and review this in a way that's a bit new to me. Let's see if it works. My thoughts are in bold . Running down ...

*Gasp!* Oh no, so many grammar errors! I love this poem. It's fun to read and you did a really good job on it. That's all I can think of ...

Hi, Nice poem. Just spotted one little thing: 'Coz Even if I diligently try I think 'Coz should be 'Cause. Because it just makes more sense. ;) Oh and I'm ...

Not really much left for me to say except that I liked this too. To be honest, there are a lot of bitter-orphan kid stories right now on YWS. Two ...